Comments of chapter undefined of The Seven Calamities
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Nikola_Niko
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Ella and Alisha are pretty interesting, I really want to see more of them. But there's one more thing. I am starting to really dislike Helkep, don't really know why. I think you should add a little bit of positivity to him. He's quite rude and arrogant and really overconfident to me, unless you want him to be. But I would prefer someone with a hint of positivity to play the Mc.
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Ohhhhh.... My mistake. I forgot he is emotionless so obviously he would be rude and arrogant. No problem in that, Good job!
Nikola_Niko:One thing, he’s NOT overconfident, that’s the last thing he can possibly be. And yes he is rude due to him having forgotten how to respect other people’s feelings. He doesn’t even have feelings himself so how can he understnd other peoples feelings? So ofcourse he’s rude. and arrogant haha! Well you have mistaken him than, he is REJECTING Noil’s hand towards friendship unintentionally.
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