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Comments of chapter undefined of Technomancer of Marvel

Akisu
AkisuLv13Akisu

Just read through the chapters and i like the story so far, there were some typos etc but other than that it's good. Hope to see more. =)

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Thanks for sending typo corrections. please continue I’ll make the changes all at once when i get the time

chaoticCatholic
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hey when he becomes a super hero instead of showing up him self he makes robots that he remotely controls. his hero name should be skynet. also please have him start his own mutant school.

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DaoistrWH0Dt
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AUTHOR ..., in the control of his body there is a mutant or human meta that has the power of biokinesis, the MC will have no problems with using his DNA and implanting it, I say so that he has strong assets. There is also another called Darwin and its power is constant evolution or adaptability. and finally there is a human meta that has a similar power to the MC but he can instinctively build and improve the technology in that it is better than the MC, metahuman (Jonathan Silvercloud) In magic I could use quantum magic adam warlock (it is canon in marvel. Movies) is a user of it. There is in Egypt a stone that controls reality, it is not an infinite stone, but it is similar to what a sorcerer had. If you bring a juggernaut you can remove the stone that gives it its powers, but you would have to remove the power from the being that gave it (it is a kind of. Parasite is not its dimension). There is a celestial dead on earth I do not remember where: 'v. Finally, if he is going to be a hero, he has to see the big picture because in the end the government is the one who declares you good or bad (example civil war and registry) for that he can take an island as a homeland (living island, invisible I think) dr doom does that nobody arrests him (diplomatic immunity) or he can terraform a planet (they never thought of that) and screw the congressmen he could find vibranium in space After all, there is wine, there is a community living in the sewers (terrible conditions) if they were reintegrated they would suffer discrimination and they would be hunted by dark branches of the government (striker is one of them) (marvel is dark as DC if not that make it very relevant that's why I'm telling you) (the MC is neither intelligent nor an idiot, sorry for offending). otherwise the word mutant should make it so bad that with saying it they brand people. of racism (they did not think about marvel this) several problems can be saved and finally it should have so much influence in the same country and greater in others so much influence that if they annoy it it will make their country bankrupt (THE ECONOMY MOVES THE WORLD) could be countries that They do not fully recover from the 2 war also Latin America an example for their export of raw materials (Norman or Lex are an example of what their influence does): v) -Maybe I forget something? -, regards; 3.

Everton_Azevedo
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Eu estive aqui

Yui_Sealfat
Yui_SealfatLv3Yui_Sealfat

Thank for good chapter.

Zachariah_Browning_8961
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Why not buy land and build a Giant Fortress type mansion on it for his family, friends, and others like Heros and their families to live in

Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

El_Rasskull
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Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanksThanksThanks

Animeci_Prenses
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king_Gurra10
king_Gurra10Lv13king_Gurra10

This story is well thought out and super interesting don't give up.

GeeGeeTeeWuu
GeeGeeTeeWuuLv13GeeGeeTeeWuu

thank you for the Chapter

Greendemon
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Lonnie_Barrar
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more please

berserkbarath008
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author need more please. atleast a chapter per day 😀👍

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

Thanks for the chapter author 👍👍👍👍