Kid_Speech
Can you make him have a new NP? Like a reality marble that consist a castle on his back whenever he activates it. It can boost the overall stats of his allies. Also please make his other NP (Excaliburs) be like Cross calibur cause it fits but you can still use them as one NP (I'm sayimg that you can still use Excalibur or Excalibur Morgan). Anyways thnx for the chap!
The fanfic is very good, I just find it unpleasant that he cannot enter the dungeon. I really hate Falna, I always felt like it was a way for the gods to stop mortals from making progress on their own, but I am not against the MC getting one because there are so many advantages. What really bothers me is when the MC joins a Familia for not being able to enter the dungeon, it bothers me because it doesn't make much sense even if you can't register with the guild, it doesn't make sense not to be able to enter the dungeon and earn money. Even if without the protection of the guild he doesn't earn as much as a registered adventurer and has to sell the items cheaper or something. The worst part for me was the MC deciding to work in a store, because it is a waste of time. If you are going to join a Familia, it was better to do it at once instead of working in a store. He should have joined Hestia's Familia if he's looking for someone trustworthy, or joined Loki's if he wants an easy life. Anything else would be better than working in a store.