Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: New World

I'm so fkin confused and the Sentence Structure is annoying lol

wtf was that? he died, got that, he went to a processing place got that, the rest... wtf?

seem like a more realistic setting then karma dump or hero summons or apologetic/pity summons

This stressed, overworked and so done with his job death god is such a mood.

what happened?

what is this????

"if i say iits hit to flies, then iits hit to flies!" 10/10 would recommend

The ranting of this death god was excellently cringe. Thx for this moment

I'll be honest, no clue what's going on but I will keep reading

Thanks for the chapter

This is really confusing.

este idiota le echa la culpa a este otro idiota por lo que sucedió antes? y que mierda será su trabajo no?

hard to read

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Well, I am still in the first chapter and it looks good still interesting has the I-wanna-keep-reading-this vibe and your english is understandable so great job writing this

yoooo finally i have found good HP fan-fic. and honestly his english is pretty good so i see no problem here. keep going man.