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Nice
I kind of think they might be mermaids or witches... đ€
love the story but there are a lot of spelling mistakes...keep up the good work đȘđȘ
Hey I just wanted to suggest that you don't use adjectives such as milky white skin as it pulls you out of the illusion of the whole story sometimes but other than that the story is amazing.
really good,make it long please
So good want to read more
the story is nice and it's getting excited every chapter of it