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Comments of chapter undefined of Alpha's Mate

Marichu_Cupin
Marichu_CupinLv4Marichu_Cupin

Nice

CA_EroticHeart4U
CA_EroticHeart4ULv15CA_EroticHeart4U

I kind of think they might be mermaids or witches... đŸ€”

Angie_Graham_1269
Angie_Graham_1269Lv1Angie_Graham_1269

love the story but there are a lot of spelling mistakes...keep up the good work đŸ’ȘđŸ’Ș

Unathi_Mpama
Unathi_MpamaLv1Unathi_Mpama

Hey I just wanted to suggest that you don't use adjectives such as milky white skin as it pulls you out of the illusion of the whole story sometimes but other than that the story is amazing.

Alofa_Iafeta
Alofa_IafetaLv10Alofa_Iafeta

really good,make it long please

Juana_Alvarez_5287
Juana_Alvarez_5287Lv13Juana_Alvarez_5287

So good want to read more

naliah
naliahLv10naliah

the story is nice and it's getting excited every chapter of it