Comments of chapter undefined of Morphing Iniquity

The disjointed fragments pool together, weaving a story of different viewpoints. It's surreal, like pieces of a dream.

Now that's what I call I masterpiece!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Wow. Its definatly a new perspective, I have never read anything like this.

I liked it, i usually read more fast paced story but this nee and intriguing great story

I love it, I was getting confused but as I dig deeper I got the picture. well written author.

Not something I'd usually read but I have to say I enjoyed it despite being thoroughly confused throughout. Very well written and in some parts thought provoking.

yep, they are all grown now.

So, I think this is very thought provoking anf very well written. I am just a bit confused by the areas in the start of each chapter. It has numbers and statements. I am lost as to why they are there and often it takes me a few minutes to read before giving up and moving unto the actual story. Again the actual story is very compelling and requires time to digest what has been read. I just wish I would not get distracted by the starting statements of the chapters.

Way to many fragments of thoughts for me to figure out where anything is coming from - and is there a reason for the repeat, in whole sections, from what has already been written?

I was very confused at first, but after reading up to here, the separate pieces start to string together. I had never read a story told from so many different points of view, it was quite an interesting read!

This should be published somehow, so that you can ear a decent amount of royalties from it

I think I identify with this chapter most because some of the best writing (in my humble opinion) is based in Africa, by Africans. So this was nice.