invayne
Well now it's really fun and cute! But I hope that as she grows up she will also mature psychologically and don’t try to be like those protagonists who even having gone through all the shit it remains so pure and innocent after all life is not like that! I hope that Kana has a good character development and that a cute and pure girl turns into a strong woman, cruel against enemies and kind and loving to her allies (and a little bit of distrust)
I was gonna post a massive speel about how I found this book, and how happy I am about it. but I posted it and it was full of auto corrects... so instead... I'm just happy to be here... finally a good book with a Dragon as the protagonist, that doesn't either have A: really bad spelling and grammar. or B: shows dragons as complete douchebags... happy to be here Author... happy to be here indeed...
Just read through the whole story up until now in one sitting. Just wanted to let author-sama know that I really appreciate you writing this story <3 I‘m just some dude, but if you‘re interested here are some suggestions: Kana is quite the endearing protagonist, but her cuteness often comes at the price of her intelligence. While I can definately appreciate this sort of thing, I feel like in the last few chapters it went a little overboard... Also I‘m not sure whats up with the whole ‘humans are shit’ thing, but it feels pretty forced atm. Anyways its your story so just write whatever you want xD Thanks for your hard work, gonna send some power stones your way :)