invayne
Its getting pretty hard to read with the jokes not quite there and MC being too childish. Her behaviour seems more how would you ecpect from a sheltered princess and it doesnt translate well from her back story.To surrvive on the streets for many years should have made more savy and cunning than ppl her age The author keeps explaining her actions however it should have been like we can deduce ourselves that she must be doing this because of her past