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Comments of chapter undefined of Life in Shinobi World (Naruto Fan-Fic)

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Pablo099
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Se siente raro de leer no está en primera persona ni en en tercera persona me parece que lo dices cómo hizashi y luego divagas con las palabras

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Zone101
Zone101Lv4Zone101

Hopefully he gets kicked out of the clan. If possible, you could give sasuke a younger sister or some random uchiha girl survives the massacre. No harem please and no arranged marriage for him

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oceansage
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Nice start but pls use some random japanese name for mc. Also, family time is always good to build character, it's makes characters feel real, which you have done very well. But less drama in these interactions would be great.😁😁

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Juhiko
JuhikoLv6Juhiko

every time Danzo die in any story or fanfiction is a plus for me and that will made my day

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Infamous_Fitz
Infamous_FitzLv2Infamous_Fitz

Why is the mcs name sarthak

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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

I don't know who's POV I'm following. I think its the father half way in

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Plow_19
Plow_19Lv4Plow_19

Thanks for the chapter

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ruinreader
ruinreaderLv5ruinreader

thanks for the chapter 👍 need more will he have devil fruit weakness?

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ComTolManBoePyaJhu
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gram·mar er·ror

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Endo_Cero
Endo_CeroLv1Endo_Cero

another mc that falls into the clutches of konoha hahaha, and as for the mc is fine and waiting for other chapters😅😆😇

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octoberwind
octoberwindLv4octoberwind

pretty good story

No_Mask_No
No_Mask_NoLv3No_Mask_No

Great everything i would want

rajjoy
rajjoyLv1rajjoy

Thanks for chapter

kanu_123
kanu_123Lv1kanu_123

Thanks for the chapter

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Daoist770845
Daoist770845Lv1Daoist770845

Если хочешь можешь повесить на данзо уничтожение сенджу и узумаки а также убийство сакумо хатаке и тд

sword_demon
sword_demonAuthorsword_demon

and thanks for reading

sword_demon
sword_demonAuthorsword_demon

Ah !!well even I didn't expect this to be such a long drama ; I just wanted to set as stepping stone for character building and i just wrote and wrote and this happened ! And some may like it some may not so let me know so that if should create this much drama in future or not( based on majority votes : ) And i know am new so if vote will not be sufficient than I would just try to cut much drama as possible as we read fanfic just for enjoyment.

cheeki_breeki
cheeki_breekiLv13cheeki_breeki

very poor grammar