AfricanProdigy14
While I understand Rhea and Hera’s actions, I hate what you’ve done to Hestia. I mean, she is the nicest goddess who is always kind, and you have her going against Poseidon for no real reason. Your explanation was pretty flimsy too, if the gods really affected each other that strongly, there would be a lot more problems between the Olympians. Also, due to Hestia’s famous neutrality when it comes to issues between her family, you could have her be kind and friendly with Poseidon without it really changing anything. Finally, Apollo and Artemis are supposed to be the twin children of Métis and Zeus, and you had Zeus swallow Métis before they could be born. Wondering when you plan on having them show up.
I think he should take control of what is written or told about them since he knows how much that would matter in the future and also to make sure he is the shown as the good guy and the truth about what happened in the last chapter is known and maybe spread some rumors to make him be shown as even more better grandiose god
just saying why not take a page outside of book bring norse or Egypt Shinto or Vatican mythology into the fold no one has every tried that and also since you are not going to follow the cannon might as well as make arranged marriage with powerful godesses if you want to change the fan fic direction as you started nearly like several million years before the beginning of Percy Jackson book or even if you want to just saying