AfricanProdigy14
Ok.. I’m not gonna lie, my dude. This had all the subtlety of an amazingly produced movie, set in Medieval times, all of a sudden having alien warships appear in the skies above the battlefield in a crucial scene... I’m gonna keep reading, if only to see how you plan to return to the glory of what you’ve written so far. To be blunt, this felt incredibly forced and out of place, even if it was always your intention.