Comments of chapter undefined of Second World

So, you let him die to make mc stronger.

Giving him the access card is already op, not the mention the monocle. That is excessive as can be 2 chapters in. The bag, sure, a boost in amount of items or whatever he wants to carry. But the monocle, if he starts using it for everything I don't think I'll be able to keep reading another novel like that.

soo he's too stupid to try logging out? he has no idea how he got there and he doesn't even want to leave?

Don’t tell me this is a hero type MC?

pretty dull so far with nothing unique pulling me in. I hate swords so it's even more of a drag for me to continue reading. but I want to see if you will do something interesting. so I will go on to chapter 2

Too much plot armor for a begining. If everything is handed to him, i’ll drop this story no matter how good it is written

thanks for the chapter

What I hate in this chapter is the word "real" kept being repeated. Like yeah? the dialogue is annoying enough but adding "too real too real" even if isn't dialogue makes it more annoying Who else got annoyed by this?

game or not he should realize that something is completely off. the guy who died had admin privileges? that should have been a red flag right off the bat not attention how he suddenly went from being in a line to enter a beta test and now a game world. even if he thinks it's part of the game he would be a little more cautious because of all the complete senses he has i.e smell touch etc. he already noticed the (game) graphics and already thought of the possibility of not being in a game.

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....So does that mean that Mc is the only one like this?

I dont know what crack you smoke, it has a pretty good beginning keep up the great work!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

For a person who is experienced in Games - slow realization.

i like it but i wonder what would have happened if the man with the monocle hadn't died and it would have been a very different course on the story

Duh..! what do you expect.?

what happened to the round metallic object that rolled to Jack's feet? wasn't that a separate object or was it the monacle?

thanks for the chapter! 😁😃

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