Comments of chapter undefined of Spirit Magus Chronicles

this 1st chapter is one of the best I've read so far

oh my god... what happened to them??

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Inspired by Warhammer 40k and WoW?

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thanks for the chapter

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The writing is very clunky. Using a spellcheck and grammar check would help a lot. It'd be nice if more information was given about how the adopted mom treated the kids... Mixing up adoptive parents and foster parents is a little confusing. They are two different things.

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Thanks for the chapter.

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