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Comments of chapter undefined of DON from HELL

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ArisinsKareem
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Your pace is picking up, bro, keep it up and please stop from creating anymore characters please, they're just piling up on us with our hands scratching our heads and necks. Instead finalize, say 5 to 6 characters and work your magic on those limited number. Improve their characters, what they want, what they like, what they hate, what they think, how they think, and similar stuff. Flesh your main characters into real humans bro.

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