Comments of chapter undefined of The Conquerors Path

I also suggest some grammatical changes, because I keep hear “a testament to” or “of” and also “our shared passion” which could just be our passion instead. I just feel like you are using filler words and repeating the same phrase over and over in slightly different ways to sound fancy. Don’t get me wrong I really like the story, but, don’t sacrifice content just to sound fancy with every line. After a while it starts to get annoying