Comments of chapter undefined of The Dragon Blacksmith System!

hope to see the next chapter soon so I can see what direction you take the story

the writing is alright, not a fan of the constant reminder about solo leveling and the daily exercise quest might be a bit too on the nose the way it is now. If you had it be a meter for overall exercise gotten, that could take that exercise aspect and make it different whilst maintaining the benefits they give the character

also, not sure the little girl would realize what was going on that fast as monsters hadn't appeared yet and it was just the portals so mention of monsters would only scare her more

cant what for naxt chapter