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Anthony_Kirkland
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either is ok with me couldn't tell the difference can't wait for more and keep up the good work

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Zyga
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why a random homeless drunk? I mean no offence but look any where in Gotham and you can find a murderer it will still feel Shitty to kill someone but at least know you killed a killer would make him feel at least a bit better

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Narigon
NarigonLv2Narigon

plz update soon

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Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

Thanks

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Lord_tabs
Lord_tabsLv1Lord_tabs

Update your gid of the multiverse story plz

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darren123
darren123Lv4darren123

hope for more soon ( good job)

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Lorenzo5798
Lorenzo5798Lv1Lorenzo5798

a Mafia Boss is Born (kidding) good chapter, continue with the good work, what will be the love interest of the MC?

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Jess_H_C_O
Jess_H_C_OLv2Jess_H_C_O

I quite liked the chapter as it was. I hope you'll continue this book it's off to a great start. 😁👍

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trey_harris
trey_harrisLv4trey_harris

I like the first person perspective better. By the way love what you have done so far keep up the good work.

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marcosk00
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Sam_Nabors
Sam_NaborsLv3Sam_Nabors

Good chap author i wonder what will happen when he finds out who batman is!

MeanSister
MeanSisterLv15MeanSister

this is good.... and the random homeless kill kind of seemed out of place

Godverse_Hyperman
Godverse_HypermanLv11Godverse_Hyperman

Niveau 20 avec stats entre 8 à 18 ? T'est sûr que c'est le vrai stats car la, ils sont pourris

daoistxuanlong
daoistxuanlongLv13daoistxuanlong

So let’s kill someone to get an advantage to help our mother but here is the shitter will your mom who works three jobs doesn’t do anything illegal I might add even though Gotham is rife with crime and she could easily get into crime to alleviate the money situation but you decide to go against her principles kill a innocent person for a mission that might not actually help you in the end are you nuts or what have you lost all sense of understanding when you already have a cheat why rush for success that you can eventually achieve just by working hard honestly like your mom is or do you look down on her efforts to raise you children are stupid and should never get a chance to make these choices lol

DARK_SAGE
DARK_SAGELv4DARK_SAGE

Keep going please đŸ€©đŸ‘Œ

Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv13Infinite_Shadow_57

Honestly first person, but you could change it up if you feel the need. Thanks fir the chapter

suicide_Elf
suicide_ElfLv3suicide_Elf

I Like the MC more please

Zyga
ZygaLv6Zyga

so future Crime Boss?? ? Anti-hero?? CEO?? cause dude can't be keep pick pocketing for long he got to start planning out some things are it's gonna be a waste of his IQ