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Comments of chapter undefined of Fox in an inverted world

Modest_
Modest_Lv1Modest_

a good start

SabertoothX15
SabertoothX15Lv13SabertoothX15

I am pitying this man very much....almost every non-virgin knows that looking for true love is almost impossible to find in this world as everything is an illusion here...only fate can bring them together (I don't believe in fate btw)....poor guy was an idiot and a very big one

LawWillOblivionK
LawWillOblivionKLv13LawWillOblivionK

I too pity this man, at least I stopped I proposed more than 5 times and was rejected every time. Then I stopped I am not actively looking for love now and life is okay for me now.

Sjar
SjarLv5Sjar

Damn for the first time since I started reading webnovel I am honestly speeches I mean that is seriously not the fault of the mc on how he can't find his partner bacause even if he is not perfect he did his best to improve it just the problem his shitty luck with women man if that was me I would have already given up on finding relationship just wait for whatever will happen.

Stylegunhawk
StylegunhawkLv13Stylegunhawk

I can understand that all of this you write about mc is might be important for plot but what to say in this single chapter you have ntr'rd mc several time. even though now he dies and will start new life again but it still hurts. just reading from the first main point where his first girlfriend leave really make me 😔. well still goodluck with novel.

lJeDl
lJeDlLv1lJeDl

If that was me I would have given up the fifth time and just start murdering some bitches, or try to make someone my slave, or some other dumb shit.

Kioha
KiohaLv14Kioha

lol, quite dark, but i like dark joke, so keep up, lol

Free1198
Free1198Lv13Free1198

sounds like a simp, putting all his focus on being better for women, whereas he should've put all that for himself. likewise, I respect his grind, even if the objective isn't aligned to mine.

96YOUNG_MASTER96
96YOUNG_MASTER96Lv496YOUNG_MASTER96

Grammar needs work but if you read 7000 machine translated chapters of martial peak, you're basically immune to bad grammar

Jyfguy6rft6tftu
Jyfguy6rft6tftuLv3Jyfguy6rft6tftu

damn heres a tip if you can't find anyone theres always the fat bitches and the ugly girls or the gay person but atleast choose a good person

Acuario
AcuarioLv5Acuario

Un comienzo interesante, A nadie le gusta ser la segunda eleccion, Estoy curioso sobre cómo va a ser la novela, Y sobre las mujeres siendo varoniles y los hombres afeminados es un concepto interesante,hace tiempo leí una novela así dónde el protagonista se quita la camisa en la casa y las hermanas lo miran sorprendidas ya que está mostrando sus 'pechos desnudos' jajajaja

Whenwho
WhenwhoLv2Whenwho

I think it's a really good idea for a novel

VANITAS_VANITATUM
VANITAS_VANITATUMLv3VANITAS_VANITATUM

me recordó al espadachín cultivador que también había reencarnado en un mundo inverso donde las mujeres son más fuertes y "varoniles" que los hombres y los hombres son más débiles y "femeninos" que las mujeres y también si un hombre se cultivaba le daba disfunción eréctil xd

ManOfCulture69420
ManOfCulture69420Lv4ManOfCulture69420

Start is good and all but my guy needs friends to talk to lol but idk what love is and what that person goes through cause I've never dated anyone

3991klj
3991kljLv43991klj

DaoistJYJ739
DaoistJYJ739Lv2DaoistJYJ739

It's a good start, and I wasn't bored.

Cursed_sin
Cursed_sinLv12Cursed_sin

Bruh it’s good but get grammarly Its free ver is good enough to help ur writing

I_LOVE_MEGUMIN
I_LOVE_MEGUMINLv4I_LOVE_MEGUMIN

I guess he hasn't watched Kaguya-sama:love is war yet

XXDarkKingXX
XXDarkKingXXLv14XXDarkKingXX

A very good start but take care of the grammar, mainly prepositions (he/she).

Ezzykiel
EzzykielLv11Ezzykiel