DE_LEON
Damn for the first time since I started reading webnovel I am honestly speeches I mean that is seriously not the fault of the mc on how he can't find his partner bacause even if he is not perfect he did his best to improve it just the problem his shitty luck with women man if that was me I would have already given up on finding relationship just wait for whatever will happen.
I can understand that all of this you write about mc is might be important for plot but what to say in this single chapter you have ntr'rd mc several time. even though now he dies and will start new life again but it still hurts. just reading from the first main point where his first girlfriend leave really make me 😔. well still goodluck with novel.
Un comienzo interesante, A nadie le gusta ser la segunda eleccion, Estoy curioso sobre cómo va a ser la novela, Y sobre las mujeres siendo varoniles y los hombres afeminados es un concepto interesante,hace tiempo leí una novela así dónde el protagonista se quita la camisa en la casa y las hermanas lo miran sorprendidas ya que está mostrando sus 'pechos desnudos' jajajaja