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Comments of chapter undefined of My System Wolf

ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13ShaadyJ

You’re also mixing that last bit with she. As well as “you”. In the next chapter, when the system is speaking to the protagonist, she speaks to him using “she” this and “she” that. It would you, not she. If anything it would he. You’re also confusing “him” and “her”. Which has the same connotations as “he” and “she”.

Yisu221
Yisu221AuthorYisu221

Look, I don't use English as my main language and I haven't even studied it. I literally don't translate it myself, it's translated by a separate program. Of course, I know those 'she' 'he' problems, as soon as I see them in the translation I change them but... not all of them, I just give it 2 or 3 looks. Sorry if this gives you a visual cancer, but it's the most I can do, I can't spend 2 or 3 hours editing each chapter to make it read perfectly because in the end I don't make money and I do it for fun. Besides I spend most of my time studying from 8am to 8pm, I have to prepare myself to enter the university.if you read and understand, thanks.

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shay_love
shay_loveLv14shay_love

🧐🌞This was a interesting chapter

ShaadyJ
ShaadyJLv13ShaadyJ

You keeping mixing up he, she, and I. “He” refers to a male and can be third-person. “She” refers to female and can also be third person. While “I” is the first-person pov for both. You seem to switch from “I” to “He” in sentences where “He” doesn’t make sense.