Um_royhan
Good writing some of he/she/hers/his is mixed up. I like that it wasn't drawn out like almost all the other books on this app. I get so tired of reading book that everyone believes the son in law is useless and he ends up being a great guy with money and has to prove himself to his wife and her family. This was a good change.
hi...please checked your chapters as for ch.55 & epi.1 missing...double on ch.56 & epi.2.....read this story from dreame before it suddenly deleted then luckily found it here...wasted my free pass on same chapter (ch 56 😒😓...not to say i'm cheap but really i can use the pass for other stories 🤪😜)..btw good story hopely can read the missing chaps....
I truly appreciated the story line, plot, and characters. I especially loved the nice nasty side of Nathaniel and Nicholas; it added an extra edge to the book and made it more interesting than just a simple love story. The family connection was a nice twist but I saw it coming when Hayden's eyes were mentioned and the fact that Aunty Sally was a twin and she'd died. I'm happy you didn't drag out the attraction between the two leading characters and allowed them to explore their feelings and emotions and express their love for one another and not go through the break up and make up to prolong your story line. You that to fill it with so much more interesting stuff that can be used to do sequels from this book, i.e, Nicholas/Diana; Belle/