Comments of chapter undefined of His Curvy Obsession (BWWM)

So far you are doing a great job.. I love the story plot. The different characters which bring colors to your story. Just need someone I guess to proof read it before posting just to check on those small typos. But over all, It's promising..❤️

They are so cute together!😍😍😍😘😘😘🥰🥰🥰🤩🤩🤩🤧🤧🤧🥺🥺🥺

I do love the story. i love that Nathaniel is innocent in some areas but still ruthless in others! I hope that they will try And talk some soon

So far the story is great. The plot is interesting and keeps people wanting to read. I would only look for someone to help spell check and proof read to improve.

the only thing I ask is you don't make Angelina give in so fast to Nathaniel . make him work for it. if she has to leave him for a minute do so or cold shoulder him til she ready to accept him. otherwise I love your books.

i was just thinking that maybe angelina and the writer have the same character. i like this story very much......

You are awesome sweetheart !!!!

A few grammatical errors but not a bad story love it, I just don't like to correct grammar whilst reading.

So far it's perfect no criticism from this side 🥰🥰

So far so good..

Loving this so far

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I love the characters

The translation sucks

you are doing well :)