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Comments of chapter undefined of Abyss Mage

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Abyss Mage

Juarez_Culau

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Kromal_
Kromal_Lv13Kromal_

Last 4 dialogues were really good, I'm talking about grammar and writing, if the later chapters are like that or close to that, I won't complain. There's only one thing to nitpick tho. Sometimes you put words in wrong order like in this last part at the end "..., so should you too" this... should be "..., so you should too". What you did is you wrote that like a question which clearly wasn't one.

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Juarez_Culau
Juarez_CulauAuthorJuarez_Culau

Yeah, I am not sure if I keep doing these same mistakes but I will keep that in mind. Thank you :)

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Galaxyz
GalaxyzLv13Galaxyz

How old is the mc?

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me_casa
me_casaLv13me_casa

just wondering but is the mc immortal and how often will these character perspectives change throughout the story because i know that you are doing it to develop the story but i find it kinda annoying

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Dieu_Van
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Dao13ofbook
Dao13ofbookLv4Dao13ofbook

ok so we have a child from unknown place in a battlefield, in the heat of the battle. he doesn't remember anything but he survives a critical strike and his health is being replenished, presumably after he absorbs the soldiers around him.... i like how the story unfolds... i hope this child is a hybrid with two seperate"sides inside him. devil and human... just like nero son of dante in dmc series. i hope im not not spoiler. just my wish. but if I'm i will erase this comment 😂😂😂😂

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