Comments of chapter undefined of Battle Through The Heavens: Domination of The Ancient God

Lol, so for 17 yes s, he couldn't even change a shit, he just stood waiting for the plot??? I won't be surprised if he also called xiao yan 'trash' with the others...

Can someone explain to me why every Chinese fic there is always the word " Naturally" " Naturally he walked to the hall" "Naturally he ****ed the dog" "Naturally he killed him" "Naturally he seduced her." Chinese English translations bring my head in. How is it natural when we don't know the character?

Xun'er in harem?

what is the link of original novel

Harém.: Cai Lin, Xiao Dai Er, Na Lan Yan Ran, Ya Fei, Xiao Yi Xian, Yun Zhi

thanks for the chapter

thank

I suggest Peerless Twin Spears of Doulou dalu, much better, It has perfect grammer etc. I suggest Peerless Twin Spears of Doulou dalu, much better, It has perfect grammer etc.

Thanks for the chapter

nice

Thanks

gracias por el capitulo

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

are you really writing fanfic then why are you making the same mistake like the original novel .... challenge her I will take you down in three year later ... come on dude are you serious about your novel or what 😑.... much of the fanfic I read all don't follow the original story and plot ... but you are doing it ... I am totally disappointed that you novel is like every other cultivation type novel.... for god sacks write something new other then copying man ....

Thank you for the chapter!

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Thanks for the chapter

plot xiao yan, take the ring, get yao yan, unlike other wuxia xiao yan success formula was 99.9% by yao yan, 0.1% by luck

Thanks for the chapter on a good story