Comments of chapter undefined of Another Tale: Osborn

For some reason when you mentioned his physical change I imagined that the GOAT himself Sung Jin-Woo was standing there. Got chills all over my arms.

jesus this is so slow😭

Mc need a all black (carbon black) ninja suit like this If Mc were to get sharingan In the darkness Only his red eyes will be appear Cool and scary

Is this the end here As expected all fictions end same way Auther lose motivation block head... Lost interest......

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I can't recall the amount of time MC has vested with each girl in this life. the amount seems too much for a man not a monk of the celibacy vows to act as a stupid virgin boy. more forced MC stupidity is dragging down the fanfic. the protagonist is acting like a Japanese manga middle school child.

Mc closed desciples Need a ninja suit For Felicia hardy blackcat Mc could make for her a full black ninja suit like this that is bulletproof even could protect her from exploded bombshells... Near her... That suit had a Spatial mark using his Spatial element to that could tell Mc were she is any where And Mc could use reverse teleporation on her to summon her beside him Also no one could take it off her...

I suggest Mc should try to teleport to asgard Make advanture there Training Learn something about inner force or magic.... Make a fake identity for him there and buy a house there Make a followers Create a new business... If Mc were to own something like shadow clone techniques He could go there while keeping a clone to take his place and he could exchange location any time when needed to do that Or .... Manage his time to balance doing things in the two places

If lady death were to meet Felicia hardy I think both will become hit it on and become like real sisters Lady death find it fun to had a little sister (share the same man) May be lady death could choose her Like how phonex choose Jean grey...

I suggest that lady death after all this years of just dealing with stiky smelly zombie and skullton. And other undead She that for the first time find something in her heart like worm feelings for Mc like she when she think about him feel her life more colorful not just boring grey... And she miss him all the time She want him to want her beside him... She don't understand those feelings But she do understand that she can't lose those feelings ever

I had a suggestion Luxanna Make a connection with mc again And give him a mission with a reward Mission??? (that mission isn't simple its a difficult one that will put Mc on the radar of other op evildoers.. So that will force Mc to be more active not only act passive And watch from the side) The reward I suggest Uchiha bloodline inheartance Very pure and strong one not like madara but equal to the six sage or indra I know it's cliche But sharingan could support Mc so much

If me to unlock qi Or Chakra...

Bernard the wingman.

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

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Thanks for the chap! Keep up the good work!