Comments of chapter undefined of Another Tale: Osborn
Another Tale: Osborn
TheXVoid
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TheXVoid
Yea, another thing with the novel, next time dont try to make it seems like wishes (like usual) novel only to time gate them and then the MC still needs to "earn" or learn them manually (even in accelerated pace). Just make it clear from the beginning that's how it is, I can't explain how annoying it is to wait all this time for him to unlock the 2nd "wish" and then find out "oh you thought that is it? na, now he needs to learn them, earn it". It's not bad but you made it appear like most novels when its not, it should be made clear from the start (for the readers, not the story).
This chap feel’s contrived and deliberately set up in way MC recieve’s all the benefit’s. First Lux intervention now which could happen again. Lady Death’s as a potential benefactor. MC soul just happening to be sooooo pure. Plot device’s and convience’s set up in way that leave’s it far to be desired.
