Comments of chapter undefined of Another Tale: Osborn

Nice chapter, but man i wonder when he will finally get together with MJ. They have been dancing around each other since the start of this story. Btw, will the MC finally use the serum next chapter and become the worlds greatest martial artist?

Mary Jane Watson

Jean grey Phonex force

I hope Gwen Stacy Become spidergirl of this world

Natasha Romanoff With Jean grey the phonex force And Mary Jane Watson Mc could those three great red Head beautys That could be cool

Emma forst I hope she get close to Mc Might join him Maybe in this earth she is the ex-white queen And she is alone May be Mc could get close to her through some side business deals or through hobbies like race car or something like that

I suggest that Felicia hardy mother Unexpectedly like osporn and want him as her son in law So she will encourage her daughter to chase after him if she like him May be giving her advice I Like if you find really good man don't let him go ever Don't give up on your love If there is others rivals don't let that stop you...

Felicia hardy If she were to unlock the ability to transform in to little kitten I hope Mc create a black collar for her that could transform in to black i Ninja carbon black suit Instead of being naked in the open Also her cat form might had a mysterious ability that could support her Like super speed in runaway and evading reactions She could bestowed unluck on her opponent temporarily ... Her eyes turned golden she could trace her target to steal anywhere and see traps... (even as future insight)

Good to know you are Atleast still alive Take care of yourself

Thanks for the chapter. Good pacing with the romance by the way. So he still can't access his other ability? He's still not at peak human physiology?

Mc could install a plasma gun in his cane point That he could use as a deadly weapon that instantly viperate his enemies Or lower its strength alittle to just shock them to lose there concecious A long range weapon

I suggest Mc to create a toy for his son Not a normal one Did you watch that move Real Steel A real robot That his son could play with And also could at some critical cases act as bodyguard ...... Maybe Mc could create a new sport about robot boxing in this world That could be cool

Suggestion Lady death I hope Mc real identity that even him don't know is the Reincarnation of Avery strong being like phonex force or lady death.. May be the representation of devoure force (predetor) And lady death I hope to see her choose Felicia hardy blackcat (she chooses her to get close to Mc) as her avatar like how phonex force chooses Jean grey

I think sheald want Mc to work with them (under there control) Like tiny stark and his father They want milk Mc of his hard work for free (brainwash him like what they did to natasha she now there pawn) I hope Mc refuse join there job as researcher

Thanks I enjoyed this fiction Please don't drop it

The romance is this novel is astounding and so down to earth, it doesn’t seemed forced at all and it is nice to read as well.

Thanks for the chapter

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

It will be good if mc give serum to his butler bernard, so he can protect his son when mc not at home