Great
In the 3rd last Paragraph its writen “what says the time” it should be “what is the time?”
Is the world building here remind anyone of The Mech Touch?
great description of the fight here, i really like of it, thanks for the chapter!
During the captains briefing, he said they would be given guns, what happened there.
in the Sixth Paragraph, it is written that, "The only ammunition given..." I think the word should be equipment. Hence read as, "The only equipment given..."
thank you 💝
this chapter good description of the fight thing but so far he landed at a mild workout when sleep[img=recommend]
Thanks for the chapter😘