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Comments of chapter undefined of Fated

Brianna_Stair
Brianna_StairLv15Brianna_Stair

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Zagawaprime
ZagawaprimeLv14Zagawaprime

So, she arrived to the "interview" in a sweater dress yet Aiden removed a top and jeans when he undressed her. I didn't know he was a magician in addition to being a werewolf.

Phyllis_Neel
Phyllis_NeelLv11Phyllis_Neel

Needs a good editor. But it's a fun read so far.

KButler_4950
KButler_4950Lv12KButler_4950

I'm trying to stick with this but it's so disjointed and the translation isn't helping. If she swooned or fainted, how did she pull him to her in the bed?

d_elfe
d_elfeLv1d_elfe

Yep, she's grilled ! And what's with the basement ? Werewolves or vampires ?

Debbe_Phillips
Debbe_PhillipsLv15Debbe_Phillips

And what about Gemma

Benita_Jonathan
Benita_JonathanLv3Benita_Jonathan

we are getting somewhere