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re-incarnadined in a World with Game sistem

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Baby_Brown_xo
Baby_Brown_xoLv4Baby_Brown_xo

Hey I want to say that even though this isn't the best story, as there is really no plot or explanation for what's going on and it moves at a really fast pace (sorry if I'm being meanđŸ˜„đŸ™ forgive me) but I do think that the concept of your story is pretty interesting and I think that if you just work on your weaknesses and the things your story lack that you can make amazing stories đŸ€—

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yaya_sota
yaya_sotaAuthoryaya_sota

thank you, and i take no angreenes towards you, when i wrort this story i was just getting into writing. and thanks for reeding this story, it just came to me and i didnt really know what to write sometimes or had to much on my mind.

2yr

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thehater
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im saying the story is trash because you made the story go way to fast he got adopted by gods and right after he gets teleported into tony's house and called him a mortal like what?

3yr
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