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re-incarnadined in a World with Game sistem

yaya_sota

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thehater
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im saying the story is trash because you made the story go way to fast he got adopted by gods and right after he gets teleported into tony's house and called him a mortal like what?

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yaya_sota
yaya_sotaAuthoryaya_sota

well than, that's explain it, please if you want to criticize other's, don't just write trash by it but, an idea to make the story better or an idea to improve myself, like you just did.because no one understand's the simple word, "trash",simple i don't know what you mean with that, so thank you.

3yr
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Baby_Brown_xo
Baby_Brown_xoLv4Baby_Brown_xo

Hey I want to say that even though this isn't the best story, as there is really no plot or explanation for what's going on and it moves at a really fast pace (sorry if I'm being meanđŸ˜„đŸ™ forgive me) but I do think that the concept of your story is pretty interesting and I think that if you just work on your weaknesses and the things your story lack that you can make amazing stories đŸ€—

2yr
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