Comments of chapter undefined of My life as Sasuke
My life as Sasuke
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Just my opinion Killing the " crime lord " can be made to look like a inside job with all the thuggish type people he was using and the looting could be used to cover the cost of reevaluating the rank of their current mission Doing another C rank mission or higher in my opinion makes more sense than them going back to lower rank missions as unlike cannon the team is improving As for ideas for missions you could use some of the stuff from the movies or do what if scenarios of the team doing a mission from later in the original story but changed because the team got to the mission sooner (how things change could be very debatable so lots of room for author to take liberties with out anyone having room to argue about that not happening) Hope this is helpful
Thanks for the chapter ❤️ About the wave arc I think shorten it is ok, I don't think it would be a good idea giver mission to them, Sasuke needs time to training and mission will be a waste of it and for the girls I still stood with SasukexSakuraxKarin, I mean, you already are changing Sakura's character for better so why not? The whole thing of she's annoying and bla bla bla, I just will say, she's practically a civilian who born in PEACE TIMES, I would be surprised if she's some power seeking person, since she had no reason for that. And think people is hypocrite, not a bit, like a lot, because a don't see anyone bashing Shikamaru, I mean, he's practically the same as Sakura, BUT, he's smarter and comes from a Clan, so that's make him worst than Sakura, it took Asuma to died for him to make something.
I think kill gato and give him a summoning animals mission before the exam and as for animal I like the crows maybe expand on them so there more powerful like giving them a sage or something. for girls love Karin definitely have to get ino, temari, and hinata. temari could be a marriage thing between villages and hinata could be him just noticing her and spending time with her and making sakura and shika get together would be hilarious she's already like his mom
I'm sorry for saying this author but you should focus on developing the story more, the plot, the fight, his character growth, his training, his goal, preparing for the otsutsuki in boruto's plot etc. It just doesn't make sense to create a harem in this story, he have so much to do and so little time. The most you can squeeze in is a romance between him and karin. Because karin is a confirmed choice for his you also need to write about karin character growth, growth as a shinobi. You can also make him interested in karin but doesn't have the time so he'll develop his relationship after the 4th great ninja war. Also if you focus on two things like the story and the romance without planning the quality will drop. It'll just be another fanfiction that's boring, repetitive or dropped. Especially if you add harem in this. It's already so hard to plan for his romance with karin, karin's growth, sasuke's growth, the fight scenes, the plot, and the story etc, where do you wanna squeeze in the harem at? Most harem story/fanfiction are bullsh*t and bad anyways, people read it for the smut or something, rarely for the plot or your story. I'm being logical and speaking the truth.
Thanks for the chapter, I will be supporting your two jobs, for the harem, I would say hinata, you can take advantage of the 2 and a half years that Naruto leaves the town to train to conquer it and if you cannot add hinata, then maybe konan, you could try to save her before she fights with obito, or maybe mei but I don't think it's very realistic considering that she is the future mizukage and I don't know how to approach them, the truth is, I don't like most of the current living female characters , I wish that ringo or pakura were alive, but they are dead.
Has Haren, of the women outside of Konoha, Karin is very good, she has suffered a lot (in the end in the canon she is alone). Konan fixed. Temari alliance. Tsunade if you want to take over all of Konoha (in the end she can also help you get revenge on Danzo because she also exterminated the Senju clan). Hinata is a pervert, if not her then her sister. SAVE SARUTOBI to die like Sakumo by suicide when the whole truth of the clan exterminations is revealed, som various Senju, Uchiha, Yuhi and others. Make the Sarutobi clan suffer, Asuma Sarutobi who also knows about the exterminations with Daimyo approval. Kurenai to Asuma, if you want you can seize her for the haren.
