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Comments of chapter undefined of Elementalist in a dungeon(Danmachi fanfiction)

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V1ce
V1ceLv3V1ce

cool, nice focus on action and lifestyle then. its danmchi though so is it harem or no harem?

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Immortal_chen
Immortal_chenLv1Immortal_chen

I just wanna say that...

keanu_eugene:No harem

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Not_so_pun
Not_so_punLv4Not_so_pun

yes!! finally someone who is focused on dungeon 😤😤😤 but I still hope that there will be romantic interest

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Jajaiabakabaianaa
JajaiabakabaianaaLv4Jajaiabakabaianaa

Interesting, but will this story only have action moments or will you also show slice of life / romantic scenes?

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Dave_Guest
Dave_GuestLv14Dave_Guest

Hey author, I really enjoy your stories and ideas. Grammar is good. Story as well as development are mostly unique and not controlled by the AU. So keep going and thanks.

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Slushy_Apollo
Slushy_ApolloLv15Slushy_Apollo

The numbers only really helped if you played the danmachi games plus they are mostly there as a guild showing how close to the next letter you are

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Karmarhein
KarmarheinLv3Karmarhein

So far, I like the description. I enjoy the dungeon crawler part of it so I'm hyped to read a novel centered around that, reminds me of my tens or hundreds of hours playing Persona (95% of that time is farming the dungeons, the rest is main story and social links. I particularly like to achieve the higher possible results early on even though those rewards would come for free later on, like reaching level 25 in a dungeon designed for level 10).

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shillbear
shillbearLv14shillbear

i like this idea as i like itbest when authors use the world itself to create a story rather than following the plot

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Lucass
LucassLv4Lucass

Are there romance here?

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Naaaaaaa
NaaaaaaaLv5Naaaaaaa

cool

ForkMe
ForkMeLv14ForkMe

100 floors makes sense for the Dungeon. 10 floors per level. But if you level too early (before you max your stats, or at least reach S rank) you're never going to be able to match the floors your 'supposed' to be on for your level.

Gumpta
GumptaLv4Gumpta

I dont mind focos on the dungeon however it would be far better if he knew plot , what if he's down there after year 1? or was it 2 where the black dragon breaks free , he will be dead or the monster that killed ryuu familia spawn right on top of you ? he could live far better knowing the plot and take advantage like money making or catching evilis.

P_P_3802
P_P_3802Lv1P_P_3802

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MLakuru
MLakuruLv4MLakuru

Have not started to read yet but just from this I'm looking forwards to it. But, if this ends up being harem that's an immediate 1 star deduction even if ill read this grudgingly. It will give me a bad taste the whole ride there.

Redzeth
RedzethLv13Redzeth

Interesting, so kinda like an alternate universe huh? I like this idea more than in cannon time

brucelee5638
brucelee5638Lv4brucelee5638

will there be romance?

Assasination_devil
Assasination_devilLv6Assasination_devil

Nice concept

TheSageGod
TheSageGodLv1TheSageGod

Noice