Comments of chapter undefined of In Harry Potter with OTS System

I like the concept. However, please don't forget about the story / plotline itself... Its becoming extremely system oriented to the point where only the title of the story and the words great hall at the end remind me this takes place in the potter verse. The plotline also hasn't been present enough for me to remember it through all the system content ... Keep in mind that many of us read multiple fanfics at the same time and to keep your plot memorable, it needs to often be reiterated every chapter in some form with your current update frequency. Making system spell dominant, chapters doesn't help in recalling the plot and seeing it progress. Both of which are important. I hope i have not offended you by bringing this to your attention. I truly do like the concept behind your story, and point this out only to help you improve it.

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Thaaaaaaanks for the chapter ❤️ Hello author, have you thought about making an auxiliary chapter on spells? As time goes by the number of the spell increases and there are many of them to remember all, there are some readers who never played Tibia (like me) and others who are not that into the game, you don't have to complicate it too much, just the name and a brief description of it, you can also copy and paste the language structure for people who are interested.

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Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to more!

Can you please not use hyphens incorrectly at the end of your dialogue sentences? It makes me think that the person speaking is being interrupted or cut their sentences short as is the traditional and grammatically proper use of the hyphen at the end of sentences.

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Siento que cada momento en el que leo esto disfruto mi vida mucho más, gracias ya se en que autor gastar estas piedritas

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

gracias por el cap

so wish fulfilment where mc is a like Pokemon to Harry Potter and his ever glorious scar??? if it is I would be disappointed.