Morning Star LL
This is pretty good, the only problem I have with it is the name of the mc. What is with Cloud Hao? Mc’s name is Hao Yun! I get that the ‘yun’ in mc’s name translates to cloud, and I get that the translator probably did this so the readers can understand why the mc’s game company and his nickname on that music website both had cloud in it, probably also to spare themselves the effort of adding a tl note at the end of the chapter which would’ve only taken a minute at most typing it up. But still, why the heck did you do that? It just feels so out of place when everone else’s names are either Liang this or Zhang that, yet the mc has a fricken ‘cloud’ in his name! It’s like seeing an ant on a blank piece of paper, it’s like someone who hasn’t taken a bath in a month standing in the middle of a shop that sells perfume, it sticks out like a sore thumb! If the translators see this, then I beg of you, please change it.