Comments of chapter undefined of Beyond Critical (Multi-Cross DxD, Rosario Vampire, Ikki Tousen, More)

It's a pity the author decided to leave the original character to Ddraig. A pathetic imitation of a dragon...

Are you going to stop updating your other fanfics? If so, you should say that before. That way we won't be disappointed too much.

Thanks for the chapter.

Wow. Good job at making issei that much more unlike able. It is honestly a skill that I’m envy of. Ttfc

He can take the balance breaker spheres from Issei, like he did with Vali. There, in addition, there are also traces of the spirits of former carriers that come with her. (English is not my language)

So, are you going to stop updating your other fanfics? Or droop them?

Gracias por el capítulo!!! <3

nice

👍

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for chapther

So while Issei has the soul, Kaito will have the flesh with the god principle. He will not have the limitations of the booster gear?

Got to say, I don't like the development with that girl, I would find it annoying and its getting to the point of rather not read this. Either go harem keep it simple, or give one FL. Her behavior is just causing that dynamic to be the center of the story. Not to mention, realistically, she either accepts it, gets with it or it will NEVER work, not without plot armor which in that case may as well us plot armor to make it work well. Otherwise, realize it won't work long term, and cut ties, better for her, better for the MC, better for the readers. Let's be real, so far this entire story has been OC, little to none of the canon plot (so far), it still feels like we are getting to know he MC, no adventures to speak off, no story (killed one angel for a power boost... yay) and we already getting into day to day drama. This is like chapter 200 material where the MC establishes himself.

Thanks for the chapter.

Thank you for the chapter

Gracias por el capítulo