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Comments of chapter undefined of Kingdom of Hedonist God

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Wet_Lilly_Rose
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Short for a first chapter, but a good starting. Written well enough with no glaringly obvious flaws in the grammer department. Did a decent job on what all first chapters should do which is getting the reader hooked or at least interested. I am curious though, flash's dad said his brother's daughter is Diana. Is he saying brother as in actually blood related brother? So is Diana his cousin? 😏😋

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Helios_Sol
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hope the mc has major talent or something like that