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Comments of chapter undefined of One Step at a Time.

zsxcfvbhnmk123
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Great work today!

FluffiestEmperor
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Thank you!

DaoistZettaiHeaven
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Make Kisara His Disciple After Ragnarok Arc? :D

Boredpersonaidan
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Force niijima it'd be funny

HaKuRyu
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Psy_duck
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thanks for the chap 👌

degermon
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Thanks

Afonso_Aaron
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Thanks for the chapter

Justsome_nobody
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thanks for the chapter

Justsome_nobody
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thanks for the chapter

America_Yea
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MikaelDragonsoul
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thanks for the chapter

Ryo_Kami
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So the hint this time is kisara huh? I thought it was the hermit little sister or kenichi little sister.

Ryo_Kami
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Thanks for the chapter

Von_Krieg
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Thanks for the chapter

Psan
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So... Kisara for the harem? I also wonder... since mc dosnt needs to die to visit another world, then he can bring Shigure with him, she definetly will listen to mc after coaxing her for a while "Correcetly" and saying her gaining "Sisters"

ReMormius
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+++++

M0r0ving12
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I don't really understand why the plot of the original matters. Just as I don't understand the meaning of Keichi's presence. Yes, he could sometimes be mentioned, but write entire chapters dedicated to him? What for? This story is not about him at all. It gets really boring ... And I really don't understand why I should even care a little about Keiichi and everything connected with him. Even Yami and this murder nonsense has absolutely no meaning. In truth, the main character is ... He is strong ... He is experienced, but ... One gets the impression that he practically does not affect the world. Wanders the world. Yes, it does the mission. But have we seen at least one interesting and non-canon character in the original Keiichi? Interesting situations? Places? Anything original? And why does the protagonist tie his plans to Keiichi's timeline at all? The last one kills me altogether. This kid is not the main character of this story, but why does it revolve around him !? So yeah ... It's getting boring. Very, very boring. A sort of insertion of a minor character into the background. Author ... Think very carefully about what you do and write. Your main character already has problems that just hang in the air. It is too soft in some aspects and amorphous in others. Lost consciousness from Shigure in his underwear? Should it be funny? No, it's not funny. And attempts at humor are not funny. He has a constant threat of losing the only thing that distinguishes him from the gray mass ... Memories of a past life. I even have doubts that he has not lost them already! And the empty drama with murder against the wall and the near-death experience with "darkness" and voices do not work, but only annoy. How to read about a person with possible Alzheimer's disease, which can aggravate at any moment the pleasure below the baseboard. And sometimes the main character resembles an autistic person, which does not add sympathy to him. So it turns out that he seems to be strong and visited many places, but in fact he practically did nothing and did not influence the world. The cruelest part is that even in his own story, there is no impression that he really is the main character. Even though I call him "the main character", but ... I don't even remember his name. This is how he is perceived as an extra.