Alvinbrrrrrr
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I think the story is nice but not to be rude or anything. I think a rewrite of the story would be great
I agree with the rewrite. I wish you the best author.
yes do it it would be great to read it again.
I thought the story was fine so far. But if you don't like where thr story is at right now, your not going to want to update it as much, which is not good.
