FalloutNerd
Honestly the flying wish was a waste. Could have asked for the Martian Manhunter abilities and gotten flight, as well as shape shifting, telepathy, super speed, super strength and eye beams for free. I would also swap out the speed reading for power nullification, absolute defense, compulsion or stealth. Dumbles and his ilk keep all the best stuff locked away so speed reading is useless if you don't have access. Finally, a blessing from the Goddess of Love is good if its good looks and a form of compulsion. Otherwise I would have to go with Ra or Hades for a death domain related blessing.
Thanks for the chapter. :) As for what I would wish for: 1) Same as the mc Panmnesia 2) And Speed reading or the ability to absorb the knowledge of something through touching it. 3) Infinite or as High as possible potential in anything and everything (Non-magical and magical) 4) Metamorphmagus but edited to allow full transformation into animals aswell 5) All-speak or being a stable Obscurial(in other words I would have full control over it both in human form but also in obscurial form.)
Not gonna lie I would probably choose grindelwald's family to be reborn as. My reasons are: 1) you'd get good genes and look good. 2) etticate of a noble (same as this MC). 3) learn to be as charismatic as grindelwald himself who inspired hundreds if not thousands of wizards all around Europe. 4) get to learn all his spells like the one he used in Paris that tried to destroy the city. 5) it's grindelwald why wouldn't I want to be related to him. It would mess with dumbledore as well.đ
Hmm, my five wishes...? 1. same as MC, panmnesia (it's literally like a god-level ver. of eidetic memory oof) 2. same as MC, blessings, but I would ask for 5 gods instead of all gods (Hecate, Aphrodite, Ares, Hades and Athena) 3. I would ask for 3 rare traits for a wizard to have (parseltongue, metamorphosis and perfect control over wandless/wordless magic) 4. the ability to manipulate time - this, I doubt the gods would allow such big control over, so I would explain and specifically ask for the ability to stop time for as long as I want and to go back in time by 1 week max (like rewinding). 5. I would ask for the ability to null all effects of any fatal curse 3 times in my life.
1) Ability to reincarnate to other universe after death. 2) Growth, adapt and handsome body. 3) A version of Library of Heaven path with an A.I from WOTMW instead of the golden page. 4) Ability to connect with the world knowledge of the reincarnated world. 5) An ability or a shield to hide him from higher beings.
I could be a good story. No point giving advice when the story is already written so i'll just write what i hope it to be. Definitely more forcused on characters. We already know he's gonna be OP. In HP, Knowledge, Practice and a little talent make someone strong. He's set on talent with the blessing and good on knowledge due to his wishes. Just try not to talk too much about his powers. Gary Stu is fine as long as you focus more on other things than him being incredibly awe inspiring to everyone around.