Comments of chapter undefined of The Master of Souls

At this point in the story the KDA stuff is much more interesting the main one us good but it’s just not as fun and honestly the only problem I have with the KDA stuff is the wording of ari’s back story i like the idea of the pressure slowly braking ari but it just comes of cringe. I do think the main story has potential you just need to do more world building but over all this is one if not the best fanfic I have read.