Brown_Eyes
"Generic" is the only way to describe this prologue i spoted 3 cliches in the prologue and i get you were trying to be original by changing mages to scholars and clerics/healer to doctors but that seems more mundane instead of fantasy and when i see the 7 kingdoms i can't help but think they are connected to the 7 sins (rulers personality could match or they are being attacked by the sins themselves)