Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
0_Jordinio_0
Chapter comments47
Before I suggest that Mc change tenten theam uniform and fighting style to be like Chun-Li Still all weapons attack through seals Upgrade her seals in to tattoo seals And teach her how to master kicking might as well add strength seal to both her legs And Sakura I suggest That Mc change her uniform style Into something like medusa rider from fate stay night Mc could create anti dojutsu black unbreakable glass. Let her hair regrow so much like rider then teach her how to fight with her hair like Jiraya....
What if Mc secretly Remove oratchimaru authority over sasuki seal The do something to the seal to appear like it still under oratchimaru authority Then secretly tell sasuki about the real facts about his clan case and that his true enemy is danzo and someone else But he need to get stronger Then Kakashi and the third with mc give sasuki a mission to be a spy on oratchimaru And Mc himself will contact him periodically I hope sasuki won't oratchimaru like Canon...
NGL, pretty awful "double speak." Talking about a "BIG TURTLE" and saying he's never fought a "prefect one like me" while referencing KILLER BEE and YAGURA, the two people who are famous just for being PERFECT jinchuriki. As a completely ignorant outsider, I'd come away from this knowing he's a perfect jinchuriki of the 3 tails with basically no thought needed.
Good job! Maid acquired! These are all reasons I would trust her even more! Daiki is very pragmatic and can see the big picture! She has 2 options now as she won't be allowed to go freely by the village obviously. 1) submit to the village as cannon fodder, but know that the village will never trust you and will secretly wish for your death. 2) MAID -> Daiki will protect you, you will have a normalized life, you will likely die otherwise...
