Comments of chapter undefined of The Shinobi of Straw Hats

it same ad the manga, nothing change [img=faceslap]

Meh

The Naruto power system is way higher than One Piece’s. Theres seriously no way he can be so pathetically weak except for plot

did you make this chapter? please stop being so shameless, you did add Jon name in one paragraph and the rest is the same thing, this is already in the level of plagiarism.

make this chapter? ur kidding right.🤨🤨🤨

Bastard!!!!, Fanfic was mad for different story if the story route was same as manga why i'm reading this SHIT!!!!

hey i make this chapter?!?!!?!!? seriously~

Copy paste from the manga, hahahaha, I hope you start making more changes author or your fanfic is going to go to the trash because to read One Piece I'm going to see the manga, your work has been very good so far but you have to put more changes. Thanks for the chapter !!

Need more! Thanks for the great chap! Also how many years did Jon sacrifice?

now the real question where will Jon train??? together with luffy or some other separate place??? i hope its a separate place or it wont be interesting!!!

So basically MC actions change nothing and he's just invisible person when it comes to plot (considering that it's almost 1:1 with original one piece)

Me gusta por lo general tu fanfic pero los ultimos capitulos son muy malos en el planteamiento hubiera sido mucho mejor que el protagonista no hubiera participando en la guerra ya que no hizo nada y los evento fueron iguales y no cambiaste nada. Era mejor si se quedaba varado en alguna isla.

Thanks for the chapter btw where will he train? Will he go back to the Revolutionary Army base again? Or with luffy and Rayleigh in Rusakaina?

gracias por el cap

thanks for the chapter.

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

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just a suggestion, during the 2 years make jon train and travel and join backup with the strawhats back at totto land or wano.

Thanks for the chapter

New chapter? Sorry just excited