Comments of chapter undefined of The Shinobi of Straw Hats

the japanese lines are way too cringy it just kills the mood :/

I feel like you’re needlessly trying to make evry fight for your mc seem somewhat difficult, if it isnt stamina problem, it’s “he has no fighting experience” you’re also completely underusing and underestimating his sharingan, but he has only been a ninja for 2 years so it kinda makes sense. we’ll see how it goes as the story progresses. i recommend you do research on the important jutsus and on the sharingan. keep up the good work so far.

Anime lines are fine but do them in English so we know what it means lol.

slave harem in the labyrinth of the other world. . Here are the very powerful flawed weapons. Mana / Chakra absorption, resistance absorption, paralysis, poison, sleep, etc. And girls like Roxanne

Thanks for the chapter as always peek!!!!! maybe use madara's quotes as he's basically copying his style. Keep up the amazing work!!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!

You could copy madara whenever he fights someone strong

can you give me more...?

why do he keep telling his enemies about his abilities. i don't understand, he should know keeping his abilities a secret(apart from his crew) is a good thing, from his memories of anime and real live.

please stop with the anime lines and weird poses in the clock tower

Thank you Keep up the good work

thank

Give MC summoning animals Thanks for the chapter

at least he's getting exp and with it stronger and thanks for the chapter author san more chapter please this is awesome

thanks for the chapter

how old are you author? no anime lines plz...

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Thanks for the chapter!!

thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story