Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto Dimensional System

Read this because of the reviews, they were right about the MTL style of writing and had not gone through editing though it was still much better than other MTL's. If I had a problem would be the names, should at least put a bit effort into changing at least the names as to not get confused, though mainly it is because of chinese sounding names in a japanese fanfiction.

very confusing

I find the grammar really not good...hope it improves...

there are some grammar mistakes but it is still understandable

Why does everyone believe the village is so young, here's proof that it is close to hundred years. (I meant 88 years instead 77)

there are words that is confusing but it is still understandable [img=coins]