Player_Tenason
There was no need for the racist dialogue within the chapter. Also plz add a brief background summary of the team as an index, I am having difficulty remembering the players. On another note, I like that you’ve taken full advantage of the first two mission worlds. One aspect that I think should be improved is the skill description and reason for purchase. Although I like the cultivation addition, I have difficulty appreciating it since you’ve yet to mention the benefits to any of the realms he’s broken through.