Spiritlord
is it not reincarnation fic?? if not then there is not really one can criticize you about ..but if its then I suggest Do make him remember his memories after he watches the plot its rather fun to read a reincarnator doing their things instead of just slight deviation formed because of Oc characters, who do more harm than good because they are not supposed to be in the story..reincarnated mc's atleast go with more variation than an Oc..