Shane_The_Reader
This was indeed better but not because of how long the chapter was. overall it felt as if there was more content on this one because of the action and because the other one progressed 2 thirds like the original story. So this chapter felt more creative and more fitting with the story where the other one felt just decent or acceptable in comparison.
This chapter is much much better I read a few fanfiction And in mY Opinion and slowly dont really care anymore what the mc does with the knowledge about the word. What i do care is reading a mc that traiNs like a machine and when the Canon moment comes except a few changes in the fight to Fit the mc in eveything else stays the same As if the mc Plays no role in the outcome