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Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

You can actually making the selling feature part of the rouge class. The higher the level in rouge the more he can sell and the higher in bard the more he can buy. Or you just make it sell and buy are related to rouge. The biggest selling point on your story, for me at least, is that the MC works for his powers. So being given a convenient way to get items sort of ruins that. You can remove restrictions like making items costing EXP, since those are just there to limit power creeps. But just pulling a sell/buy system out of nowhere is just making it more convenient for not reason.

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Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5Harem_fan

An improvement to the Gotcha would be to select what category of item you roll off of...in the end it does not matter due to author intervention but it makes it feel like the MC has some control of it. And Black Cat is the best!!!!

MoonSon
MoonSonLv5MoonSon

I want more...

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desmodontinae
desmodontinaeLv1desmodontinae

I liked the chapter name and how it seems like the "finds the sky" is just going to be a reference to how he's using Air Elemental forms this chapter until Skye shows up.

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ViniDrako23
ViniDrako23Lv4ViniDrako23

Thanks for the chapter

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Anotherweirdo
AnotherweirdoLv3Anotherweirdo

First

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reading1dao1god
reading1dao1godLv7reading1dao1god

Thx

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AlchemyBeast
AlchemyBeastLv5AlchemyBeast

Awesome chapter can't wait to read the next chapter and he should take Neville Longbottom as apprentice. awesome for introducing sky

Classic_Balrog
Classic_BalrogLv12Classic_Balrog

Thanks for the chapter, now I don’t play dnd, but I am a fan of it. So correct me if I’m wrong, but isn’t multi classing a thing? And if so, why isn’t he doing that?

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Zethyrx
ZethyrxLv5Zethyrx

Thanks for the chapter

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Duke_Gambit
Duke_GambitLv1Duke_Gambit

Second! Also great chapter!

Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

If you bring someone over from Worm their reaction to hydra would be funny.

Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

Sorry for spamming messages. But I keep forgetting to add something. Anyway the Buy/Sell system would make him almost insta OP due to the price of things. So I recommend putting a restriction such as no using the items on others or sell them. Though I still think you should not have made the buying system. You can make it so he can sell his loot. And can only buy ingredients or common items. No magical items. He needs to craft them himself or buy them in the world.

Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

I really think you should not have added a way to get items. At least make it only common items. Don’t upgrade it. Otherwise it would vastly reduce the usefulness of the artificer class. Plus it’s best you keep the story as realist as possible. It would be super convenient to just sell off loot. Otherwise he would have to use rouge or bard skills to sell the shit he gets. I recommend making the seeping of loot a temporary feature. Up to you though.

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

Need more chap

DOLPHIN_hill
DOLPHIN_hillLv14DOLPHIN_hill

god this is amazing i need more

Yanorth
YanorthLv13Yanorth

loving the novel dude, mc should focus more in the grove, like awaken the bear to a dire bear and all that.

BrownOptometrist
BrownOptometristLv11BrownOptometrist

Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍

Kurama_is_tsundere
Kurama_is_tsundereLv6Kurama_is_tsundere

Thanks for the chapter. This fanfic is quite different from anything I have read before like it has the dnd elements but none of the dice bullshit controlling the MC's decisions or actions. like don't get me wrong dnd can be great as a trope for fanfic but it really ruins it when a guy(MC) who should be able to curbstomp random goons was only able to defeat them with luck on his side Because his dice roll was low and I was like wtf come on that's bullshit

JustDontKnow
JustDontKnowLv6JustDontKnow

Thanks for the chapter